Spencer Park Trip

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.

• The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
• Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
• A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

Spencer Park Trip

On Friday Room 1/2, 3, 11/12  to Spencer Park on a bus for a fun day. On the bus I sat beside Jasper, Hunter and Quaid. My group was group 2c when we hopped off.

We got in our group.

First we went to the beach and the waves were big. My dad was in my group and I went in the water a little bit. There were different schools there, one I did not know.

Then when we came back we had morning tea and that was yummy because I had an iced bun and some cheese and crackers.

Next I went on the playground played with Hunter, Corbyn and David.

We played on the rope tower and we played tag on it. I was in, then me Hunter and Corbyn made a team so we were in. So I got Bailey then ran she did not get there in time so we went up the top then we went back down and when we played tag we were playing do not touch the ground so we had to do park-war but park-war is so easy so we only got tagged one time. I nearly touched the ground but I had my hands there so I did not fall.

Lastly, the group went to Lagoon walk. It was 1 km we saw this old town that all of the people left because an earthquake when we went we went on the bad path so we went back to the playground and played for ½ an hour. Hunter, Me, Corbyn and Iszac made a team then I saw my bro from a different school.

I love the trip I want to go a again with the school. It was fun at the the playground but the walking was the hard bit but some of it was fun the funny bit was when we went on the bad part.

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