In the past weeks our class (Ako Ngatahi) were writing a short story about a video titled “The Present”. It was a story about a boy who got a present and it was a puppy. After he discovered that the puppy only had three legs.
Here is the video, I assume that you might enjoy the video and maybe my writing too bye!
W.A.L.T: Write a narrative
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
- The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
The Present
I was playing video games they are very fun to play and then my mum came in she had a box.
I opened the box and there was a cute fluffy dog it looked happy the puppy love me and I love it.
Then I saw it’s leg it was off.
I did not like it “Yuck!”, and I threw it.
Then it saw a red squishy ball.
Then it ran into the cupboard and grabbed the ball.
The puppy kicked the squishy ball to me.
Then the puppy kicked it in a box then it ran into the box but then it got out.
Then the dog happy try to find the ball.
The dog found it. I picked up the ball. I got my crutches went outside and threw the ball and went closer on the grass. THE END
