My Writing

Kia ora everyone,

Welcome back or to my blog. Today I'm going to be sharing my hotspot doc writing. We try to use the word "the" in are writing to make it descriptive and try not to use the word "I" because I makes it boring. We had to use this image and make some descriptive writing out of it.



Here is my writing:
Find five things related to the senses to describe in this image. Start each one with ‘The…’

1. Boom boom boom, the thunder was loud when the lighting struck the water. 
2. The clouds where getting darker and darker but then lighting hit.
3. The waves rose higher when the wind started to roar them up.
4. The lighting hitting the waves were so powerful that I could feel them from the bay of the beach.
5. The cry of joy was getting into me. “Mother Nature at her finest”.

I hope you enjoyed my writing, if you did please leave feedback in the comments. Tom

Morning to my Mates!

Hello everyone,

Welcome back to my blog. If you didn't already know i'm in Auckland. I just wanted to stay morning everyone. Here are some photos of what Auckland looks like in the morning. Also here is me and my family's breakfast.

                                                                        Breakfast..

                                                              Sky tower in the morning..

             Thank you for looking and reading my blog, if you enjoyed please leave a comment. Tom

Auckland!

Kia ora everyone,

Welcome back to my blog. Today i'm going to be sharing with you what i'm doing in my holiday. Me and my family are in Auckland right now. Have you ever been to Auckland or the north island of New Zealand. I'm staying in a hotel with my family. We have some plans that we are going to do in Auckland. I will be sharing what I'm going to do in other post this week so stay on my blog and see what I do.

Please leave a comment or a question below.

Photos.
At Christchurch Airport.


Me on the Plane.


In Auckland by the Sky Tower.


Kind Regards,
Tom

My Holiday.

Kia ora everyone,

Welcome back to my blog. Today i'm going to get you to try and guess where i'm going in the holidays? I'm not going to say in this blog post where i'm going but tomorrow I will post where I am. This is a short blog post so just try and guess where i'm going and put it in the comments. Here's a clue it's in the north island.

Kind Regards,
Tom.

Today's Word of the day is Fragrance.

Talofa Lava (Hello) bloggers,

Tom here and today we are doing the word of the day. Today did you put on some Fragrance? I did. If you didn't already know today's word is Fragrance. We do the word of the day to help improve our vocabulary and we also put words like fragrance in our writing, Enjoy.



Thank you for looking and reading my post. If you enjoyed please leave a comment. Tom