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Today i'm sharing a Writing DLO with you. It's about a movie scene with language features, characters/ actors the setting. It's a horror story about some friends in the forest and something or someone comes up and gets them.
Here are the slides of what I have been doing but I have not 100% but here is what I've got.
I hope you enjoyed my post if you have time leave a comment. Tom
Monday, 4 May 2020
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Thanks for sharing your writing planning with us. In your Word Bank I particularly like the word "trepidation". Your Character list is quite good (you could have provided more detail though), although you haven't actually described the setting in slide 5 (instead you have started talking about the plot).
ReplyDeleteOverall, your planning is quite good, but I think it needs some sort of plot twist to make it really interesting.
I look forward to reading your first draft.
- Mr Mitchell