Hello today i'm going to be sharing my work in Persuasive Writing.
Here is my work:
Animals Shouldn't be kept in a zoo. (title)
I strongly believe that animals should be kept in a zoo. Presently zoos take care of lot's of animals, help endangered secedes and assist animals in their births.
Firstly, in New Zealand zoos like Orana Park have lots of native animals like the kiwi, tui and eels. These animals live in encloses for the safety and comfort of the animals.
Additionally Auckland zoo have crocodiles, spiders and dinosaur bones that have been preserved for many years and will be there for many years to come. So that younger generations can see what we see today.
Finally zoos take care of the animals, clean them and feed them!
In conclusion I think animals should be kept in a zoo.
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