W5 Writing!

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Welcome back or to my blog today i'm sharing my writing with you. We had to compare and contrast the 2 styles of shoes. I do my best in my writing so if you see any mistakes tell my in the comments. Now to my writing.

Introduction:  Today we are looking at a pair of sneakers and a pair of scuffs.

Compare: The sneakers are running shoes. Similarly, the scuffs are walking shoes.

Contrast: Instead of having shoelaces like the sneakers, the scuffs are slide ons.

Conclusion: I think that the scuffs are the better choice because they are easy to get on and you can wear them at the beach.

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Word of the day. Sceptical

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Welcome back to my blog. Today i'm sharing the word of the day with you. We do the word of the day to help improve our writing, we also do the word of the day because we can use word's like Sceptical in are writing. Now to the word of the day.



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Writing Post!!!

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Welcome back or to my blog. Today i'm sharing my writing with you. We have been writing this with a video that we have been watching it's 7 to 8 year old boys, 800 meter race and we had to use the ideas from sound. For example "The audience was cheering so loud." Now here is my writing.
Link of the video we looked at: LINK

The men and women in the high-vis jackets where telling me were to stand in a loud voice. My heart was thumping at one million miles an hour. I was waiting and waiting for the starting shot to go. I heard it, ‘CRACK!’ I began to dart ahead of everyone I thought I was running as fast as a bullet. The audience was cheering so loud but all I could focus on was the race. I had the self confidence that I could win. I heard 500 meters, 400 meters, 300 meters fro the loud speakers. The feeling of excitement was getting to me. My legs were so heavy at this point. 

New I was going to stop but the audience was cheering me on. 200 meters then 100 meters. I was happy but kids were catching up. I saw someone in a hi-vis jacket I was getting closer and closer to him. Then I made it the guy in the hi-vis gave me a hi-five and said good job. THE END!

I am a 7 year old boy.

I am running an 800 meter race.

I can hear:

• The men and women in the high-vis jackets telling me where to stand. 
• My heart was thumping one million miles an hour. 
• The shot from the gun to go.
• I begun to dart ahead of everyone I thought I was as fast as a bullet. 
• The audience was cheering. “Go go go” yelled the audience. 

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Weekly Words!

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Today on my blog we our going to look at the word of the day. Today's word is content, so if you haven't seen any other word of the day blog post on my blog this is why we do it. We do the word of the day to help are spelling we also can use words like content are writing.
Here is the word.



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My Amazing DLO! Wow so cool!

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Welcome back or to my blog. Today i'm sharing a reading DLO with you. Me and my friend Quaid made this DLO on Render Forest. The question that we had to answer was: How do you feel about the way families are created in this community? In the video me and my friend have talked about a book called The Giver. It's about a boy and his family that think they live in a perfect world. Now here is the video.

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Word of the Day

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Welcome back to my blog. Today yes we are doing the word of the day. Like last term we to the word of the day to help improve our vocabulary, we also can use words like Cheeky in our writing. Now here is the word of the day.

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Dance

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Welcome back or to my blog. Today I'm going to be telling and sharing my topic. For Topic W.A.L.A (We are learning about) dance, drama and music. This is called the performing arts.

This time me and my class are learning about dance. We have made a document on google drawings and put 5 of the dance moves that we want to learn. Here is my Document.



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