Welcome back to my blog. Today i'm sharing my hotspot writing with you. Hotspot writing is like free writing but you have a task to complete. We were inspired by a image and then we had to write about the photo. So I based my story 100 thousand years in the future. I hope you enjoy my writing.
Here it is:
I had to write my own story inspired by this picture.
I had to.
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100 thousand years in the future
Earth once was a beautiful plant I still remember the good days. Scientists made me invincible I could never die well that's what I thought…
Me thinking that I was invincible made me fearless. So now 100 thousand years later everyone was fearless. People thought I was superman and spider man combined. My earth was a war field everyone had guns, knives, no one was scared. Gun fight after gun fight everyone was just having their best life. I always had my crew of 3 with me. Me and my crew had to wear masks, I had a gold one and they had silver ones.
I hope you enjoyed my post, if you did please leave a comment. Tom
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